Poem response

Winter Snow

Walking in the winter snow,
My feet leave tracks that show where I go.
This snow has such fluffy feel,
I sometimes question if it's real.

Walking through this wall of white,
I cannot tell if it's night.
Wondering where i am going,
The snow just keeps on blowing.

Absorbing all this wet white powder,
I hear the winds howling louder.
Finding my way in the snow,

I wonder next where I shall go.

by: Shane

Poem reponse

I thought that Shane’s poem is well done, and I thought it was really creative. I felt like it was my first time walking through the snow. This poem is very descriptive and gives you a clear image in your head as he uses lines such as “My feet leave tracks that show where I go”. He also did an excellent job keeping a meter throughout the whole poem. The theme really connects to Canada, as many people know Canada as a cold place that’s filled with snow. This really describes what you would see your first time walking in snow.

Canada

by Munda

Canada, oh Canada what hast thou done with me whenever I do close my eyes my heart is there with thee Your mountains and great forests of an infinity Sequoias stand majestically ancient serenity What everlasting pleasure lies in your scenery the crumbling walls of what once was beneath a Maple tree Golden fields of waving grain whisper a lullaby the sunset slowly fades away beyond your endless sky Canada, oh Canada what hast thou done with me I feel thou whispers in my soul I wish to be with thee I spot a single red deer scent danger in the breeze the slightest noise will make her flee among your mighty trees I see your children playing out on a frozen pond at snowball fights and slapping pucks a magic way beyond Mem'ries of the days gone by engraved into my soul return to you I will some day it's always been my goal Canada, oh Canada what hast thou done with me thou temptress of my craving heart I long to be with thee