Poem response

Winter Snow

Walking in the winter snow,
My feet leave tracks that show where I go.
This snow has such fluffy feel,
I sometimes question if it's real.

Walking through this wall of white,
I cannot tell if it's night.
Wondering where i am going,
The snow just keeps on blowing.

Absorbing all this wet white powder,
I hear the winds howling louder.
Finding my way in the snow,

I wonder next where I shall go.

by: Shane

Poem reponse

I thought that Shane’s poem is well done, and I thought it was really creative. I felt like it was my first time walking through the snow. This poem is very descriptive and gives you a clear image in your head as he uses lines such as “My feet leave tracks that show where I go”. He also did an excellent job keeping a meter throughout the whole poem. The theme really connects to Canada, as many people know Canada as a cold place that’s filled with snow. This really describes what you would see your first time walking in snow.